great eaby add,

[art b]

needs punctuation though..

http://cgi.ebay.co.uk/130517266255#ht_2259wt_1141\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"nofollow\">http://cgi.ebay.co.uk/130517266255#ht_2259wt_1141

[EDGE]

that advert is fuckin awful, it's near on impossible to read without any punctuation.

[Fieldy]

If it had punctuation I could understand it & enjoy it

[Andy]

It wasn't too bad to read on my phone, but then it was cut up into individual pages. It sort of started out funny, then just got a bit long in the tooth.

I hope his wife doesn't read it, or that could be quite awkward!

[Cunning Plan]

Trying to be one of the 'interesting / funny' ads that get a lot of attention. Totally fails due to lack of punctuation